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The Mothman Cometh


« : March 08, 2004, 05:59:27 PM »

While this poem is a little cliched and has a rather simple rhyme scheme I think some of you may enjoy it.

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like a true original
once upon a time in the west
a man who seems invincible
like a bulletproof vest

a bullet to make 'em bleed
you hear screams and hollers
'cause he'll do a dirty deed
for a fistful of dollars

prpblem needs to be killed?
not a problem anymore
you'll have the blood spilled
for a few dollars more

he'll stop anyone in his path
and that's a guarantee
they will all feel his wrath
good, bad, or ugly

so if you need a cowboy
who has a true aim
then you need to employ
the man with no name

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« #1 : March 09, 2004, 04:43:38 AM »

enjoyed it, lol.


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« #2 : March 09, 2004, 12:32:15 PM »

this was enjoyable to read MOTHMAN. you swing a pretty fast pen yourself.  ;D  thanks !

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The Mothman Cometh


« #3 : March 09, 2004, 06:39:38 PM »

thanks kermit thanks cigar joe

all compliments are appreciated

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« #4 : March 10, 2004, 08:16:49 PM »

good stuff!

third stanza could use a little work... but other than that i loved it... great job!


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This post gets Agnew's stamp of approval!


« #5 : March 12, 2004, 05:47:26 PM »

While this poem is a little cliched and has a rather simple rhyme scheme I think some of you may enjoy it.

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like a true original
once upon a time in the west
a man who seems invincible
like a bulletproof vest

a bullet to make 'em bleed
you hear screams and hollers
'cause he'll do a dirty deed
for a fistful of dollars

prpblem needs to be killed?
not a problem anymore
you'll have the blood spilled
for a few dollars more

he'll stop anyone in his path
and that's a guarantee
they will all feel his wrath
good, bad, or ugly

so if you need a cowboy
who has a true aim
then you need to employ
the man with no name

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Questions, Comments, or Insults?

It was okay.  I agree with Grandpa Chum, your FAFD stanza could use some work, but you did a nice job.  Love your screen name, BTW. ;D



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